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here i am drowning
and you have no idea what to do,
you're so lost
and panicking.

why don't you take your hands
off my shoulders?
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r0binVI Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
gosh i cant tell u how much i can relate to this. love it.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Thiraiya Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Sadly, some believe that they help by worsening the situation due to their inability to see with their hearts.
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner May 21, 2014   Writer
lovely poem. you're quite a talent.

(also: i read your journal. i thought i could go one day without being ashamed of humanity, but apparently not. perhaps said commenter should get the stick out of his ass first.)
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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Catiminy Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist
Exactly how I feel. Great job :D
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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xXSuperDuckXx Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This Sounds Like BEN Drowned..
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
?
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ha. I like it.
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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crystallized-skies Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like the twist at the end. Bravo. 
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
very good!
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant ending - that really says it all! :clap:
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :D
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:iconchasmandala:
ChasMandala Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course! Not a problem. :)
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