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i want your ghost
to haunt me,
every memory of you.

let them flood me
and drag me down;
drown me in your
name.

fill my lungs,
i'll take the pain
at least you gave me
something.
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:iconramdaschi:
RamDaschi Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Professional Artist
so you are the ghost -- but it's moving. Ok.
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
Wow, very dark and emotional. Well done! Each new stanza continues to improve on the dark tone. :D
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
Welcome! :)
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arabelle-elizabeth Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
I like this very much.
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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GEZIM1885 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Nice 
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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scurge2223 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i like your poem i always tryed to write poems except im not really good
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. (I don't consider myself good at poetry either... I'm sure you're poems are wonderful.)
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scurge2223 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :)
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*your
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:iconboundtoyouforever:
boundtoyouforever Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
do i dare say
be careful what you wish for

a beautiful read~
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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:iconboundtoyouforever:
boundtoyouforever Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
you're welcome~
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DeathMonster777 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
amazing like always
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
something is better than nothing....or is it?
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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WriterOfTheSky55 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is really good! I like your style already. 
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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