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i can think of no other time
when i found the rising dawn more beautiful
than a falling midnight
than that morning when we laid amidst a meadow
with flower crowns and ivy hearts
and you whispered dreams into my ear
and held me soft and gentle,

like the lining of a casket.
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done - the twist at the end is great. It's as if the poem draws you in and then mercilessly spits you back out...:clap:
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :nod:
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is wonderful. I love the title you chose.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome! ^^
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Saphirylis Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wonderful, I liked your use of words. :)
By the way, how are you?
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
I'm okay, how are you?
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Saphirylis Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem. :)
I'm quite okay, except the fact I'm tired like hell because I barely slept last days and I started exams today... But else, I'm okay (still don't know from where I still get the energy to even move). :)
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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