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my lungs whispered and asked the smoke
to dance
to the sound of your slurred voice
singing off key
to whatever song came on the radio.

i'm sure the stars looked down on us
in amusement
as we laughed and ran about that dying meadow
in the ides of october.

there's something bordering on nostalgia
i feel for that scuffed leather jacket
you always wear.
but maybe it's just dreaming.

and when we finally started back home
we could have died
and for once in our lives
it would have been with smiles on our faces.
i wonder what the coroner would have
thought.
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AngelOfAsh Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I could say why I like it... but I can't. I just do... I give up lol Great poem lovely
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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AngelOfAsh Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
welcomes :)
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A fine piece from beginning to end - very nicely written. :clap:
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome! :)
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
great poem, I really like it.
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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