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i gave you everything
i had
just to make you whole
once more,
and then you left me
empty.

and now i wander
like a ghost
just searching for some place
to haunt,
because your door
is closed to me.
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acceleratedbymadness Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I swear this is like the 8th poem I've favorited of yours! I'm sorry if it blows up your inbox but they're too good :D
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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Shecallsmemickey Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student General Artist
I've finally had the time to go through my messages after being afk for weeks. And honestly this poem really speaks to me, especially at a time like this.
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel it! good job.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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