and it would make no difference
if these walls could
because even they know when
to keep quiet.
What a sharp quick cut!
oh I like this!
This is lovely. My only suggestion would be to add when before to in the last line. It just feels a little rough at the start.
I like this. how the title has an almost sarcastic meaning. Especially after the way that ends. great structure.
This is so real, it hurts. Proof that it doesn't take many words to make a point. <3 well done.