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and it would make no difference
if these walls could
talk,
because even they know when
to keep quiet.
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cattservant Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
What a sharp quick cut!
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh I like this!
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014   Writer
This is lovely. My only suggestion would be to add when before to in the last line. It just feels a little rough at the start.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014   Writer
My pleasure.
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OuroborosRagnarok Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like this. how the title has an almost sarcastic meaning. Especially after the way that ends. great structure.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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OuroborosRagnarok Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem. :) would you check out some of my stuff when you can? 
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Of course. 
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OuroborosRagnarok Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks
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KiddosPoet Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so real, it hurts. Proof that it doesn't take many words to make a point. <3 well done.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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ImpressiveHaruki Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Hauntingly beautiful.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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