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he said my eyes
gasped like a dying breath
and he wasn't going to wait around
for the funeral.
I'm beginning to think that I should not write poetry past midnight, it always turns out like this. 
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Imma-Duck Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student Writer
damn. cold bastard
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:blackrose:
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Imma-Duck Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student Writer
<3
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soulspoken Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Professional Writer
This is very sad.... But it is still very powerful. Sometimes I guess we have to experience the sad things in life to really cope with them.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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soulspoken Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Professional Writer
:D
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you must write what comes to you!
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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ArcNovaXIII Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hmm...it's morbid but i can understand the man's pain, funeral suck so much. nice work
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Whyles Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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