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I can feel your presence,
    In the air,
        In each crystal of ice,
            That form from frozen words.

I can smell your presence,
    In the atmosphere,
        In each drop of rain,
            That pours with reverence.

I can hear your presence,
    In the trees
        In each falling leaf,
            That flies like angel wings.

I can see your presence,
    In each of my veins,
        In rivers of cerulean blood,
            That flow beneath my skin.

I can taste your presence,
    In the salty ocean air,
        In each fragile mist,
            That caresses my aging face.

I can find your presence,
    In every place I go,
        In every beautiful thing,
            That reminds me of you.
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StrikeTheMadness Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional Writer
Another good one. 

Let your poetry ramble.
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
just beautiful! excellent work.
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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:iconevilscarrlett:
EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome of course!
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DeathMonster777 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow, i love the way that you used the 5 senses with an extra special one. beautiful work
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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