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You have every bit of my heart
     But in your world I'm a shadow
           That you step on without notice.
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StrikeTheMadness Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional Writer
I'm loving the wordplay here. Works smoothly with the content, and it's straight to the point.

Actually, I think this poem has some potential. If you're interested in possibly getting this poem published, I'm working with FanaticalPublishing and I believe this could be a good match! If you're interested, just send me a private message and we can go over details.

No matter what, I loved it. 
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Full-Darkness Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh boy, do I know that feeling. Soon for me it will end, though.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that hurts. so much said in such a small space. good work!
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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