Your gentle eyes glow
Like the stage lights
Illuminating the show.
There's music in your movements,
As graceful as a violin,
With such beautiful intent.
The softness of your voice,
Challenges a clarinet,
With each fluid note of choice.
A stream of harmony lives within your soul,
Like each gentle piano moan,
A beautiful, melancholic toll.
Every part of you
Assembles an orchestra,
Glorifying everything you do.
I think it's great and also uplifting.
As a musician, me likey. It's very sweet without being overly saccharine. Nicely done.
This is great, great comparisons too!
wow, great comparison. this is powerful and sweet