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Your gentle eyes glow
Like the stage lights
Illuminating the show.

There's music in your movements,
As graceful as a violin,
With such beautiful intent.

The softness of your voice,
Challenges a clarinet,
With each fluid note of choice.

A stream of harmony lives within your soul,
Like each gentle piano moan,
A beautiful, melancholic toll.

Every part of you
Assembles an orchestra,
Glorifying everything you do.
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student General Artist
so beautiful...Clap Oops! Nod 
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's great and also uplifting.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome.
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KnightSkyeSymphony Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As a musician, me likey. It's very sweet without being overly saccharine. Nicely done.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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Fresh-T Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
Nice job.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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Silverclaw9999 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is great, great comparisons too! 
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