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"I love you."
The words
left your lips
like bullets,
leaving the barrel
of a gun.

"Don't."
My very last
Dying breath
As each word
Hit their target,
My hateful,
Unworthy heart.
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IcePeltWolf Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
Let me just say I love your poems. They are so touching and emotional. They make me just think about things I rarely think about. Amazing job.
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Whyles Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. That really means a lot. :love:
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IcePeltWolf Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
No problem. :D (Big Grin) 
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XdarkXnXdeadlyX Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
very emotional. Good job! It is very good!
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Whyles Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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XdarkXnXdeadlyX Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome :)
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aww...too sad.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah..
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