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I am lost,
I cannot feel.
Is this sleep,
When I close my eyes?
Or is it death,
When I rest my head?

I am lost,
I cannot see.
Is this real,
When I hear your voice?
Or is it an illusion,
When I see your face?

I am lost,
I do not know
Where I am,
When I look ahead.
Or where I've been,
When I look back.

I am lost,
I have forgotten
How to speak,
When words weigh on my lips.
Or how to scream,
When terror fills my lungs.

I am lost,
I’ll never be found.
No one noticed,
When I went away.
They can see me,
But I am gone.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
quite good- my favorite verse is :
 I am lost,
I have forgotten
How to speak,
When words weigh on my lips.
Or how to scream,
When terror fills my lungs.

that's just so powerful :)
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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:iconevilscarrlett:
EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :D
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Hidden-Behind-A-Book Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Writer
This is beautiful! Great job! :)
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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Hidden-Behind-A-Book Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Writer
My pleasure! :D
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HanaRenee Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
beautiful
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:iconwhyles:
Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. 
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HanaRenee Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
my pleasure
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DeathMonster777 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Simply, oh I know how this feels. Thank you for this.
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