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You are the perfect story,
A plot unfurling from your touch,
And poetry in your eyes.

You speak with golden glory,
Into sentences of hate,
And promises of lies.

You are the book
I never had the words to write.
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here. Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.
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Whyles Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014   General Artist
:clap: Brilliantly written;
short, simple but somewhere I understand :heart:
Lovely writing!
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Whyles Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014   General Artist
you're welcome :heart:
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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is really powerful, great word choice and I love the shift in the middle of the second stanza :D
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Whyles Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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bkworm5 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great concision!
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Pinkamenawillkiller Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist
Wow thats some deep shit..Really good!
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